Thursday, February 21, 2008

Mucus In Cervix Blood

allright Is That?

Good news since I finished the first reading of the Avenger (not shown on this blog). Quite pleased with myself, I wiped a staggering number of faults. Yet there remains so many. I have not met (for me) large contradiction and reworking (in my humble opinion) covers only one chapter that really disappointed me. There is still a significant number of repeat (yet, yet, yet .... what do I use this one). And probably a long-term grammatical and stylistic level, but at least I got to the end and it was not so terrible. I even managed to enjoy it myself.
short Eloha am falling behind but I think it's more important to finish what I started to get down to that other thing that will probably benefit most from this work and time for reflection.
short, I now turn to others for their opinions and remarks by thanking you in advance for their patience.

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