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allright Is That?

Good news since I finished the first reading of the Avenger (not shown on this blog). Quite pleased with myself, I wiped a staggering number of faults. Yet there remains so many. I have not met (for me) large contradiction and reworking (in my humble opinion) covers only one chapter that really disappointed me. There is still a significant number of repeat (yet, yet, yet .... what do I use this one). And probably a long-term grammatical and stylistic level, but at least I got to the end and it was not so terrible. I even managed to enjoy it myself.
short Eloha am falling behind but I think it's more important to finish what I started to get down to that other thing that will probably benefit most from this work and time for reflection.
short, I now turn to others for their opinions and remarks by thanking you in advance for their patience.

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Eloha - Chapter 1 "A Song"

Eloha first chapter of which was used to introduce a little dark.
Music inspiration: Goran Bregovic & Ofra Haza - Cantonero (Queen Margot Theme)

"And the first was the One, because only he was arrogant enough to believe himself. "

A soft voice and soothing rose into the air of a foggy morning. A woman's voice, plaintive. This singing was crouched on a stone wall, legs drawn up under it, covered by her skirt of brown cloth. A rough cloth in tight bodice complemented his dark outfit. Only his bright red hair seemed to accompany clam worms in the wind.
His blue eyes as clear as water from a river staring ahead. "Eloha. This name was often in his lament. Nobody could say whether this was the reason for her tears yet all would have sworn that if and wept with her. Yet the fresh air and invigorating you stung nostrils and you to tears as if it was not enough.

But she did not sing for others or for herself, she was only necrotic darkness that encircled her heart and stifled. She claimed her sentence to the hills, trees and small hamlet below.

A crow spun for a moment over it before landing on one of the gallows that decorated the town square. So far, one would have thought to toys macabre or greasy poles, perhaps, but their fruit was much more mature and oozing entrails.

Tears flowed down her cheeks, blazing a trail as the wind tried wet to dry. His voice did not weaken "Eloha!"
She sang and wept for a man than a man, a hero, a hope. And beyond that, she wept for a country, nation, even for the world perhaps.

Today's song was known to all and never stopped. No man would dare laugh about it and thus offend the gods. Yet, all without exception would have liked it ever existed.

The last verse died away in the dawn. One soldier who was waiting patiently cleared his throat, embarrassed. He did not like what he had to do, but this was his duty.
The girl more beautiful than the dawn was left away without resistance, his face expressionless. The collection would begin soon.

M Jak Milosc.pl Gratis

Eloha - The 40 gods - Introduction

Between some fixes for "the avenger" I sometimes want to write another thing, to get into another project. Yet I do not want as vague as the first (despite the fact that I plan it has changed many times and the premises were really more due to the inspiration that a well-considered plan)
J have had different ideas (which I keep under the sleeve, who knows ...) I left to mature in order to see which one was going to win. I needed something original, different.
I did not want to get into the characters followed by 5 as the avenger, too restrictive, too risky.

And finally it came out, then two and a page of history Eloha take shape. I already qq pages of notes and I am trying to make the plan. I guess it will take some time for me to have a solid foundation but I wanted to share a little insight to the rare visitors.

Here is the introduction to Eloha:

This is the story of Eloha, the greatest warrior the world has focused to date. The life story of an exceptional man. A man that every woman dreams of love
, that every man dreams of. Yet
Eloha was tortured mercenary, who had bitter than death to one partner, murder for one reason to live. Listen So his story! And learn how a young man without a penny to become the greatest symbol of his
time.

You tremble more than he did when he must face hordes of bloodthirsty Hsros, the largest army that man has ever seen. These jumpers
born a bow in hand, crossed the east to devastate the country
our hero, then kneaded it for revenge and hatred is found
idle but will not give up! Never!
is the story of the man who will change the lives of many others when he is
to be alone. Have a listen and shut up !